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franalan July 24 2009, 14:15:35 UTC
Oh oh oh! *flails*
He can touch him!
“That’s the first time someone’s touched me kindly in months,” Draco whispered. He refused to open his eyes. “Don’t you dare apologize for not being able to give me more than a miracle.”
I have to admit, I may have teared up, just a little...
I can't wait to find out what happens at the Manor...but I don't want to story to end!

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lomonaaeren July 26 2009, 01:03:08 UTC
Thank you!

Harry is so focused on what he hasn't been able to do for Draco that sometimes he thinks that what he can isn't enough.

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brknhalo241 July 24 2009, 14:37:09 UTC
So much hope relying on faith. I still cringe when I think of exactly what crazy!Lucius is doing to his son but I just know Harry will make it better even if Draco has to be changed completely in the process. I love the message that I receive here which makes it clear that it isn't the outward appearance that matters as much as what each being has to offer from within. And when many offer toward one goal it increases the strength and the power, making that goal more of a reality than if one tried on their own. I love the confidence of this Harry and his determination but I also see great strength and determination in Draco, as well. Otherwise, he wouldn't have survived this long. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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lomonaaeren July 26 2009, 01:03:59 UTC
Thank you!

Draco is so much stronger than he knows. I think both he and Harry in this story are really too focused on what they haven't been able to do- such as escape Lucius or spare Draco any pain and suffering- and so they underestimate the efforts that they're making all the time and living with.

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kansaslynn July 24 2009, 14:41:45 UTC
Oh wow. I like this Harry you've created. Just imagining how free, happy, and powerful he must look surrounded by his wolves and their power, it's little wonder he attracted Draco so quickly. I'm looking forward to the rescue! Although I am a bit worried at what condition they'll find Draco's body in...

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lomonaaeren July 26 2009, 01:04:16 UTC
Thank you!

Well, let's say that you do have the right to be worried.

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anonymous July 24 2009, 14:42:19 UTC
Beautiful

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lomonaaeren July 26 2009, 19:15:16 UTC
Thank you!

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xelloss_poo July 24 2009, 14:46:28 UTC
BWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I swear to God, that if you make this end tragically, I'm going to be so emotionally scarred for life.

The imagery in this chapter was so beautiful and just heart-rendingly powerful. And the end of this chapter! D: I didn't want it to end. I honestly cannot wait for the next installment of this fic.

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lomonaaeren July 26 2009, 19:15:48 UTC
I promise, it's not a tragic ending! But it is a chapter longer than I planned in an effort to avoid tragedy.

The next chapter should be up tomorrow.

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