Comments | lomonaaeren: Part Nine of 'Viper'

lomonaaeren

Part Nine of 'Viper'

May 31, 2009 09:58

action/adventure, harry/draco, angst, creature!fic, auror!fic, magical creatures included, viper, chaptered novella, rated r or nc-17, two hunters series, romance, ewe, dual pov: draco and harry

Comments 36

anonymous May 31 2009, 14:23:14 UTC

Amazing! I've completely fallen in love with this fic! I'm REALLY hoping for a happy ending. PLEASSSSEEE? Great chapter!

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:21:02 UTC

Thanks! Whether or not the ending of the next part is happy depends on your perspective, I suppose.

Viper 9 slashpuppy May 31 2009, 14:28:19 UTC

End. End? Please tell me that's not the end!!!!! :-(

This is an excellent story but I wanna see more! *whines pitifully*

Please, you can't just leave it there!

I want to see the struggle between them, the fighting, the feuding, the growing understanding, the loving! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :-)

Re: Viper 9 lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:21:23 UTC

There will be a third part, don't fret. I don't know when that part (titled "The Long-Desired") will be posted, though.

Re: Viper 9 slashpuppy June 2 2009, 00:27:08 UTC

Phew!

:-)

star_faerie May 31 2009, 15:39:26 UTC

Wow. That was... wow.

I'll come back and comment again when I am more coherent.

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:21:31 UTC

Thank you!

star_faerie June 2 2009, 10:32:17 UTC

This was an interesting ending, because to me at least it seems like more of a deep breath before the plunge. With the way you've ended this, it seems like the story could go one of two ways - and I hope you write it - and that this ending is merely a pause. The ending is kind of hopeful - well, Harry didn't kill Draco (yet) did he? Draco has hope, and Harry I think has the chance of reconciliation with his friends.

otakuangel May 31 2009, 17:20:50 UTC

So... there is going to be another part, right? It can't end here, can it??

That was so wonderful and the story has really just begun, hasn't it?

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:21:51 UTC

Yes, there'll be a third part, probably similar in length to this one. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

hitsuzen_hime May 31 2009, 18:34:41 UTC

What a great ending, with Draco able to slow Harry's aging and the bond keeping Harry from outright killing Draco it comes down to either one of them holding out for success or insanity. ;) I enjoyed this quite a bit.

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:22:09 UTC

Thank you!

That part where Harry can't outright kill Draco bothers him quite a bit.