Comments | lomonaaeren: Part Seven of 'Their Phoenix'

lomonaaeren

Part Seven of 'Their Phoenix'

May 29, 2009 21:31

pov: multiple, novel-length, angst, their phoenix, drama, snape/harry/draco, bonding!fic, threesome, au, rated r or nc-17, romance

Comments 31

desolate_noir May 30 2009, 04:19:57 UTC

Wow I did not expect the attack but I know it would have come sooner or later after the attack that happened to Draco.

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:42:08 UTC

Yeah, they have enemies on all sides, unfortunately.

ravenqueen55 May 30 2009, 11:19:49 UTC

I am so in love with this story. I'm always thrilled to see any of your stories updated, but I await updates to this one more anxiously than any other story in recent memory. So...thanks for being AWESOME!

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:42:30 UTC

Thank you so much! This is currently my favorite story to write, and I'm glad that people like it as much as they do.

alina_kotik May 30 2009, 13:24:00 UTC

Great! I am in love with the way you follow the changes in our characters' perception of the bond and each other. The novel is much more about human emotions than the magic, though its pulse is everywhere.

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:42:58 UTC

Thank you!

And yes, the emotions are the main focus. In the next chapter, everyone is more confused than ever, but Harry does decide to take a definite direction, which will help in more than one way.

auselysium May 30 2009, 15:14:02 UTC

Oh Severus... Such a softy really.

And man, what a nasty curse!!

Thrilling chapter!

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:43:06 UTC

Thank you!

nonajf May 30 2009, 17:28:27 UTC

Ginny was remarkably unconcerned by the attack on Harry. She may be possessive of Harry and jealous of the bond, but I don't think she's in love with him.

The distress that Draco and Severus felt over Ginny's presence really hit home for me. Then for Harry to be struck down immediately after? Adding injury to insult for those two. I'm really feeling sympathy for Draco and Severus right now.

lomonaaeren June 2 2009, 00:45:01 UTC

She was in shock. But yes, her feelings are not as deep as she would probably like them to be. The reason why is revealed in the next chapter.

And Harry didn't especially want to bring Ginny along, but leaving her out when she wanted to come wouldn't have been fair to her, either.