Comments | lomonaaeren: Part Two of 'Viper'

lomonaaeren

Part Two of 'Viper'

May 09, 2009 09:20

action/adventure, angst, creature!fic, drama, auror!fic, magical creatures included, viper, chaptered novella, rated r or nc-17, two hunters series, ewe, dual pov: draco and harry

Comments 21

aubergineautumn May 10 2009, 00:37:06 UTC

I like the action in this chapter, and how Malfoy is slowly winding Harry into his power.

lomonaaeren May 10 2009, 01:09:40 UTC

Thank you!

Whether he'll succeed is one of the tensions that will make the story interesting, I think.

ura_hd May 10 2009, 01:53:28 UTC

I suspect that things are not as easy as Draco imagines them to be. Arrogance indeed. Nice chapter.

lomonaaeren May 11 2009, 01:21:44 UTC

Thanks! And no, not by a long shot. Draco is subject to his instincts just like most other vampires.

thrnbrooke May 10 2009, 02:07:23 UTC

Oh Draco!!! You soooo sound like Scarlett O'Hara.

lomonaaeren May 11 2009, 01:23:45 UTC

Hee! Why does he? (I've never read that book).

ldydark1 May 10 2009, 03:03:42 UTC

Oh good, another vampire fic!
I am learning to enjoy them.
I like the vampire and the vampires
Long Desired concept.
Great read, and enjoyed the action pace.
Thank you.

lomonaaeren May 11 2009, 01:24:09 UTC

Thank you! I've tried to make the vampires a bit different, so that they're more interesting.

star_faerie May 10 2009, 21:19:38 UTC

Brilliant chapter!

Harry seems so... don't know quite how to describe it. There's almost a taint of madness to him. Certainly a sense of danger, both to himself and to others.

lomonaaeren May 11 2009, 01:24:44 UTC

Thank you!

And yes, I know what you mean. Of course, since he doesn't attack ordinary humans and he can also hold himself back from attacking vampires as long as they're registered with the Ministry and not rogues, he thinks he's perfectly all right.