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tray_la_la January 14 2009, 04:17:28 UTC
lovely, lovely, lovely! i adored narcissa's comment on the conflict of love and love, and it makes me so happy when harry shows the extent of his power and abilities, and when draco is suitably appreciative. ;)

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:16:08 UTC
Thank you!

None of the Malfoys have thought much of Harry's intelligence as opposed to his skill. It was good to give him a chance to show that.

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firedraygon97 January 14 2009, 04:44:19 UTC
Love vs. Love. An interesting way to put this dilemma. I like how Narcissa isn't completely changed after Harry's arrival.

Nice chapter. I like all the fluff with Harry and Draco waking up and having breakfast. ♥

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:16:35 UTC
Thank you!

I don't think Narcissa could be completely changed, ever. She's too strong in herself. But she does take new influences on board and consider them.

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delamna January 14 2009, 05:14:47 UTC
Hah. Draco seems determined to see Harry's goodnesses as his own, while all the not so great things he does are both unimportant and taught to him by other people. Early love! And we never get to see it, but I bet he would have as hard a time adjusting to Hermione (and Ron, who is much more surprising than either of the other two because he is more obviously blokish) as he did to Harry, and he would have to deal with the fact that they are very different, for all that they are Gryffindors too ( ... )

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quill_lumos January 14 2009, 08:37:11 UTC
Your Draco is fast becoming one of my favourites in fanfic. I always like the way that you write him, but here you seem to have got inside his head. I liked the first version of this story, but I love this version.

Definitely for the 'to be read again and again' file.

*hugs*

Lucie x

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anonymous January 14 2009, 09:47:15 UTC
Very nice! I also particularly like Narcissa's divided conscience.

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