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yanagi_wa December 12 2008, 02:31:50 UTC
Well, that's interesting. Narcissa found out what I thought she would. I wonder if Lucius is going to like what he finds out. Great story. I'm thoroughly hooked.

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lomonaaeren December 13 2008, 00:50:05 UTC
Thank you!

Lucius probably will not like it. At the moment, because he hasn't looked at the evidence the way Narcissa and Draco have, he has no idea how serious the issue (potentially) is.

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incinerapture December 12 2008, 03:42:19 UTC
Narcissa is totally awesome in this.

And Draco talking to Rogers about... having relations with Harry? Lol.

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lomonaaeren December 13 2008, 00:50:23 UTC
Thank you!

Hey, there isn't much that Draco is embarrassed to talk to Rogers about!

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incinerapture December 13 2008, 00:59:45 UTC
Really? Poor Rogers. I'm sure he has to listen to some really weird thoughts of Draco. :)

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tray_la_la December 12 2008, 04:53:55 UTC
great chapter! rogers is pure, pure love!!! narcissa's talk with the healer and the letters were great -i love the extra details from this pov!

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lomonaaeren December 13 2008, 00:50:45 UTC
Thank you! I actually didn't plan this chapter at first, but I wanted to know who hung the mirror in Harry's rooms, and it developed from there.

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nolagal December 12 2008, 14:03:51 UTC
I like Narcissa playing that stupid healer and Roger's insights into Harry! Well Done.

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lomonaaeren December 13 2008, 00:50:53 UTC
Thank you!

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duchessa December 12 2008, 16:34:53 UTC
I can't seem to settle on a favorite chapter. Not that that's a bad thing, but there's so many things I love I have a hard time listing them all. Narcissa, as usual, PAWNS. I love her disguise, that little detail of her hair rocks. I wonder how this Narcissa would react to Metamorphosis!Harry, and vice versa? Acting characters seems to be a kink of mine. They make me jittery ( ... )

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lomonaaeren December 13 2008, 00:53:25 UTC
Thank you!

I still want to write the Metamorphosis AU you talked about at some point. Acting characters seem to be a kink of mine, too. They're so much fun to describe.

Lucius is hoping to get basic information, since not even that is known to the wizarding world, and Draco is also hoping that medical records may be included with the student ones.

Lucius has an exaggerated portrait of Harry's "goodness" and nobility. (He tends to think of him in terms of setting Dobby free, for instance, which is certainly something no pure-blood would ever have done). He thinks there's no way Harry would ever approve of his scheming, and that gives him a kind of childish pleasure in being naughty.

I'm really glad you like the OCs. I tend to come up with plots that rely on at least one or two, and that's sometimes problematic, given the reputation they have in fandom.

And thanks again!

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