Wow! Lovely ending. Lovely story in fact. I’ve really enjoyed being able to read through this one so quickly (one of the few advantages of having had too much work before). Waiting for the next instalment of your tales is such always shockingly hard - you write cliff-hangers too well!
Harry and Draco have a nice future ahead of them, although I can’t help but wonder what would have happened if Snape could have lived to see it! He’d have freaked out at the last scene. And, I especially liked the hints about Hermione and Millicent at the end. It’s wonderful that so many people get a happily-ever-after.
Snape would probably have been disgusted with Draco for taking up with Harry in the first place, heh. He wouldn't have gone quite as far as the Malfoys, but he would have discouraged Draco from pursuing Harry.
Hermione and Millicent were a pairing that occurred to me midway through the story, and somehow it worked out.
Excellent conclusion to the story. I was wondering lately if Hermione would hit it off with Millicent and now I have the answer to that too. And Harry was endearingly ignorant. I loved Draco's reaction.
I like how you tied all loose ends that needed to be dealt with but without making it unnecessarily long and detailed over insignificant matters. I loved how Draco thought at the end and how his love for Harry was evident and still didn't change his character.
I am short of words to tell you how much this story grew on me. I enjoyed it since the beginning, but the second half of this last part truly made me appreciate it.
I am eagerly waiting for your new stories. Considering that two are ending and the third you are writing is going to be short, I wonder which stories you've decided to start now. Maybe Aurea Mediocritas? And I guess you'll also be writing your 'live long and marry' novel. I hope the winner decides that you post the chapters as you go along.
Thank you! Hermione and Millicent got along well both in my head and on the screen. I didn't plan for a secondary pairing, but sometimes it just happens.
I think Draco has dug himself in and will resist being changed that much. He can alter himself when it's necessary, as it was to escape his parents, but he doesn't like doing so.
At the moment, I'm going to be working on just one WiP. Then it'll be the livelongnmarry novel (which hpstrangelove, the winner, has indeed agreed to let me post here) combined with a shorter work called "Secondhand Heroes," about Harry rescuing a fugitive Draco in a dystopic future. I hope to get to Aurea Mediocritas before the year is out, though.
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And we'll see. At the moment I'm not sure I have much left to say.
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Harry and Draco have a nice future ahead of them, although I can’t help but wonder what would have happened if Snape could have lived to see it! He’d have freaked out at the last scene. And, I especially liked the hints about Hermione and Millicent at the end. It’s wonderful that so many people get a happily-ever-after.
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Snape would probably have been disgusted with Draco for taking up with Harry in the first place, heh. He wouldn't have gone quite as far as the Malfoys, but he would have discouraged Draco from pursuing Harry.
Hermione and Millicent were a pairing that occurred to me midway through the story, and somehow it worked out.
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Loved this story...and the ending was perfection.
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And thanks!
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I like how you tied all loose ends that needed to be dealt with but without making it unnecessarily long and detailed over insignificant matters. I loved how Draco thought at the end and how his love for Harry was evident and still didn't change his character.
I am short of words to tell you how much this story grew on me. I enjoyed it since the beginning, but the second half of this last part truly made me appreciate it.
I am eagerly waiting for your new stories. Considering that two are ending and the third you are writing is going to be short, I wonder which stories you've decided to start now. Maybe Aurea Mediocritas? And I guess you'll also be writing your 'live long and marry' novel. I hope the winner decides that you post the chapters as you go along.
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I think Draco has dug himself in and will resist being changed that much. He can alter himself when it's necessary, as it was to escape his parents, but he doesn't like doing so.
At the moment, I'm going to be working on just one WiP. Then it'll be the livelongnmarry novel (which hpstrangelove, the winner, has indeed agreed to let me post here) combined with a shorter work called "Secondhand Heroes," about Harry rescuing a fugitive Draco in a dystopic future. I hope to get to Aurea Mediocritas before the year is out, though.
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