fic: Idiopathic neuropathy

[lollie_girl]

Author: lollie-girl
Title: Idiopathic neuropathy
Pairing: Duke/Audrey/Nathan
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The first time in bed that Nathan can feel Duke's skin.
[Written for a comment-fic prompt]
Spoilers/Warnings: no
Disclaimer: not mine

Comments

[grey853]

Cool. I like the idea that Nathan can feel Duke and not just because of the sex, but because I always feel bad for him not being able to feel touch. Thanks.

[lollie_girl]

Me too, I always feel bad for him. Thanks for commenting.

[dr_ducktator]

Hooray! Well done!

[lollie_girl]

Thanks

[daria234]

This is so amazing!!!! Thank you so much for writing it -- I LOVE it :)

I love the sense of longing, the emotional pain on both sides, and how much lies unspoken between them. I also love the hotness of it, especially the end.

I love that Nathan apologizes for it. I knew the fic would pull at my heartstrings as soon as I read that.

Also, on a shallow note, hand warming and hair touching are bulletproof kinks for me (for a broad definition of 'kink' lol).

I'm super thrilled that you wrote this beautiful fic - thank you <3

[lollie_girl]

I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for a lovely review :)

[ex_sockedan]

I've been so desperate for Nathan to feel Duke for so long. It's not going to happen on screen, so fanfic to the rescue! :)

I really enjoyed this.

[lollie_girl]

I don't know why Nathan/duke isn't canon, I totally see it happening. Also fan fiction makes everything better. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment on what you thought :)