14 - the days I live without you

Jul 27, 2011 19:31

I'm so very sorry for the lateness of the new post. But this is the first time LJ is working for me again.  I wrote a sonnet for you but is now forever lost in the glitches :( 
So no funny business here, I know you want to get back to the usual game ASAP.

There is a substitute on dreamwidth in case LJ is having trouble again.

The usual things:

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prompting: 14

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Self-prompt: A Game of Give and Take anonymous August 30 2011, 03:19:39 UTC
Inspired by elements of the Unpleasant Lawdie (http://lolitics-meme.livejournal.com/8738.html?thread=19091746#t19091746) prompt a while back. Takes place from the POV of a subsequent CLaws relationship.

Subsequent chapters may have warnings.

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Fill: A Game of Give and Take 1/? anonymous August 30 2011, 03:44:59 UTC
Nick is about thirty minutes late.

For a politician, this is hardly surprising, and David has barely given it a moment's thought. The bar is quiet, but beginning to fill, and he's had no trouble taking a corner table and covering it from end to end with parliamentary papers, and the notepad and pen on which he still, anachronistically, relies.

His mobile phone rings, just as he slides yet another paper into his makeshift Out pile, a draft response paper-clipped neatly to it. The number is Nick's.

"David, I am so very, very sorry. The meeting with George overran so long, and I still have to cover things with my team before I can knock off for the night," he says. He sounds out of breath, and flustered. It must have been quite the meeting--it takes a lot to fluster Nick these days. "I'll be as quick as I can, but I'll be another half hour at least ( ... )

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Re: Fill: A Game of Give and Take 1/? anonymous August 30 2011, 08:51:36 UTC
*hugs the DLaws*

I'm the OP of the Unpleasant Lawdie prompt - I'm sorry I didn't see your post over there and I'd have missed the fic too at that rate. I'm a sucker for the ill-treated being shown how a nice, ordinary relationship should work and this looks like it'll be a peach. I'm liking the look of your Nick here, aa, and have noted there may be warnings later. Bastard!James - will this be the first sighting? In other words, Yay!

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Re: Fill: A Game of Give and Take 1/? anonymous August 30 2011, 10:32:40 UTC
Ooooh, very interesting dynamic.
Can't wait to see how this will continue.

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Re: Self-prompt: A Game of Give and Take anonymous August 31 2011, 07:13:20 UTC
A/N: I keep feeling I should apologise for my characterisation here

It starts on a Thursday night, not long after David has first taken his seat in Parliament ( ... )

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Fill: A Game of Give and Take 2/? ^^ anonymous August 31 2011, 07:14:54 UTC
Because I forgot to change the subject line, that's chapter 2 up there.

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Re: Self-prompt: A Game of Give and Take anonymous August 31 2011, 08:07:38 UTC
Aaaaah, this is amazing. Claws and Lawdie, you're spoiling me. Really interesting idea for a fic and I'm really interested to see where it goes. That last section was simultaneously very sad and very funny ("You're really rather terrible at that" - LOL, yeah, there really needed to be at least one virgin!DLaws fic where he's just no damn good!) and very very unf.

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Re: Self-prompt: A Game of Give and Take anonymous September 1 2011, 21:38:42 UTC
Will there be more soon, o lovely author anon? This is just so good, I'm really looking forward to more...

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Fill: A Game of Give and Take 3/? anonymous September 2 2011, 00:09:44 UTC
David glances away, fingers tracing circles on the base of his glass ( ... )

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Re: Fill: A Game of Give and Take 3/? anonymous September 2 2011, 00:42:21 UTC
Anon, I am so in love with this fic, I don't even have the words to tell you. David, an awkward, endearing little bundle of neuroses, and Nick's adoration is as obvious as the fact that David has no clue whatsoever and wouldn't know what to do with it if he did. Added to that your writing, expressive and luxuriant, yet spare and minimalist, the fact that you're putting so damned much between every set of lines...anon, I think I love you. You deserve so many internets it isn't even funny.

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Re: Fill: A Game of Give and Take 3/? anonymous September 2 2011, 06:12:27 UTC
This is so good, so glad David has Nick to fix him up. hope he doesn't push him away.

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Re: Fill: A Game of Give and Take 3/? anonymous September 2 2011, 20:17:25 UTC
I absolutely love the way you switch back and forth between past and present, and the two very different relationships. I don't want to rush you, but I really hope there will be regular updates, because this is so fantastic it's hard waiting for more!

I'm curious just how much of a bastard bastard!James will turn out to be...

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Fic: A Game of Give and Take 4/? anonymous September 3 2011, 13:21:08 UTC
Nick, it seems, really likes kissing ( ... )

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Re: Fic: A Game of Give and Take 4/? anonymous September 3 2011, 13:49:49 UTC
*shiver* what a sweet, sensual, delightful chapter, anon. There were little butterflies in my stomach the whole time I was reading! :)

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Re: Fic: A Game of Give and Take 4/? anonymous September 3 2011, 20:22:06 UTC
*whimpers, is incoherent at the hotness of Claws kissing*

Nick, you tease.

I love this, though: the way you hint that DLaws is used to a lover who gets down to business without necessarily having much consideration for him, whereas Nick is wanting to take it slow.

"We could. Go to bed?"

Both hot and..... sad.

And the dialogue and their thoughts about each other and.... love.

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Fill: A Game of Give and Take 5/? anonymous September 8 2011, 23:42:03 UTC
Over the next few months, their liaisons become frequent, and then habitual.

James often doesn't even need to say anything. Sometimes they just have to exchange looks and David knows that it will happen. He can feel his horizons expanding exponentially, as all the things that he's never quite thought about happen to him, one by one. Some of it is wonderful; all of it is terrifying. Some of it makes him feel uncomfortable and exposed, and sometimes there is pain, but always there is something that stops him making for the hills as in his weaker moments he dearly wants to.

Occasionally, when work is too pressing, he'll shake his head and shut himself in his room. James will shrug, and roll his eyes, and leave him to it.

James still goes out, of a Thursday evening, and doubtless at weekends. David never protests this; For all James knows, he does the same in Yeovil.

Is this normal? he sometimes wonders. He hasn't discussed it with James at all, in fact. He doesn't know what James thinks they're doing. He just can't contemplate ( ... )

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