The Appointment - TheRealLJIdol - Open Topic - Week 20

[lolaslaughter]

Carrie and Mandie were headed to Salem for the big Halloween celebration.  They had saved up for months and couldn’t wait to get out of their small Minnesota town for a week of haunted fun with one of their old friends

Comments

[favoritebean]

Oh crap! I didn't see that coming at all.

[eternal_ot]

Damn! Great twist!

[i_17bingo]

I wasn't expecting Death. I'm not sure exactly what I was expecting, but it wasn't Death.

I really like the character of Jen, by the way. It would be fun to see this piece fleshed out a little to get into their relationship a bit more.

[bewize]

Wow, what a twist! That was great!

[bleodswean]

EEEEEE! Nice ending there!