We’ll Just Consider it an Adventure… - TheRealLJIdol - Invitation

May 26, 2017 19:28

Matt and Jennie were on their way to a small bed and breakfast in the country to celebrate their 10th wedding anniversary when suddenly they got a flat tire ( Read more... )

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i_17bingo May 27 2017, 15:54:12 UTC
I knew they were in trouble from the moment their car got the flat, but I did not suspect cannibalism. Well done!

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lolaslaughter June 1 2017, 04:00:54 UTC
Thank you so much!! I don't know why but it was the first thing that popped into my head when I thought about the prompt. Maybe I watch 'Silence of the Lambs' too much (❤️Dr. Hannibal Lecter)!! ❤️❤️

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messygorgeous May 28 2017, 02:19:06 UTC

Ahhh! I was thinking this was going to be a variation of the young stranded couple spends the night someplace only to discover in the daylight it had burned down 20 years ago and the old people who lived there died tragically!!

Ewww, cannibalism!

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lolaslaughter June 1 2017, 04:02:07 UTC
I'm glad I didn't give it away too soon!! I hope I didn't gross you out too much!! ❤️❤️

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favoritebean May 28 2017, 06:29:50 UTC
I'm reminded of the Twilight Zone episode with the book titled, "How to Serve Man." I had a feeling this would be the outcome, although I must admit that I was surprised that Jennie would take part in eating her husband.

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lolaslaughter June 1 2017, 04:04:24 UTC
As I was writing it I realized that I wanted Rose and Tom to be really twisted in the end. I couldn't help throwing that last part in there. ❤️❤️

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bleodswean May 29 2017, 17:09:56 UTC
AAAACK!!! You really struck the right tone here and it was fun to stay with it even if the ending was unavoidable!

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lolaslaughter June 1 2017, 04:05:50 UTC
Thank you so much!! Making cannibalism fun is definitely an awesome compliment!! 😁❤️❤️

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penpusher May 29 2017, 18:03:45 UTC
Just enough foreshadowing without being too overt, but it definitely was going that way!

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lolaslaughter June 1 2017, 04:07:34 UTC
Thank you!! I like to drop little hints. I had to go with creepy when I read the prompt. I couldn't help myself!! ❤️❤️

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