June, Summer, Rayne - TheRealLJIdol - Week 16

Apr 27, 2017 18:58

The thunder claps outside and wakes Summer up. She is nine months pregnant and it is 1am in the morning. That’s when she feels the first labor pain. It is time. Her mother, June, has been staying with her since her boyfriend left eight months earlier. She calls out to June from her bed, but her mother is already opening her door ( Read more... )

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bleodswean April 29 2017, 15:50:06 UTC
What a great mythology you've created - the idea that thunder would announce the imminent arrival of a nature-infused female life!

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alycewilson April 30 2017, 14:27:21 UTC
A very sweet story.

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swirlsofblue May 1 2017, 09:03:29 UTC
Lovely interp of the prompt, I liked how you had their names all connected to the power

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bewize May 1 2017, 19:28:17 UTC
This reminded me of the more fun and pleasant parts of Practical Magic! Just lovely.

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eternal_ot May 2 2017, 07:48:48 UTC
I loved the concept here. It made for a lovely read. And I wouldn't mind more from this world. Cheers! :)

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