Nyctophobia - Week 14

Apr 10, 2017 19:59

“SILLY BILLY IS AFRAID OF THE DARK ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus April 11 2017, 21:56:28 UTC
just like there is nowhere for THEM to hide anymore, there is also nowhere for YOU to hide.
Yikes! That's certainly a point most people wouldn't think of. And yet, it's entirely true.

That poor boy. We can only hope he's dreaming...

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i_17bingo April 12 2017, 12:25:44 UTC
Billy just can't catch a break. I feel really awful for him.

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rswndrlst April 12 2017, 13:49:20 UTC

Ms. Grace has the kind of smile that lights up a room

oooh nice touch!

I feel like this could have been one of the first tales told by The Midnight Society and they would randomly joke with each other during school like hey Betty Ann Are You Afraid of The Dark?

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rayaso April 12 2017, 16:08:34 UTC
This was such a good story! I loved the realization that constant light means no place to hide. It would be awful if Billy now suffered from heliophobia. "Grace" as the Being's name was a nice touch -- it makes her sound almost angelic.

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adoptedwriter April 13 2017, 23:59:39 UTC
Poor kid! Great story!

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