Fucking Potter: Chapter 3

[lolafalola]

Chapter 3: Malfoy's Manner
Summary: Draco's POV during Harry Potter's capture and time at Malfoy Manor.
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and her minions own everything related to Harry Potter and his magical world. I make no money from this paltry piece of Potterotica.
Warnings: Angst with graphic descriptions, mentions of torture.
Author’s Note: All

Comments

[nursedarry]

You should have written the book, darling - that was amazing. His diaglogue about torture and his status are really insightful and the discourse on his familial relationships are spot-on, imho.

AND there'll be fucking. What more can a girl ask for?

[lolafalola]

Wow! What a compliment. That just made my year!

Oh... if I answer your question then I'll be giving away the Epilogue chapter. Well, at least there's a whole 19 year gap to play with, isn't there? Let's just say that IF there is fucking it definitely won't be the hearts and flowers type. ;)

It's not a dark fic for nothing.

[mystressxoxo]

*worships you*

Love this!! I'm going to start calling this the Draco Inner Monologues! Lol! Or something less lame! Hee hee! I can't help but feel silly to say to you, "Hey, Lola, I love Fucking Potter!" HAHA! *denies that I say that at least once a day* I love that you quote the book; that's what makes this one of the best Draco fics out there. *hugs* =^;^=

[lolafalola]

You are so wonderful! Words cannot convey how utterly fabulous you are!

Thank you so much! I think I can't be blessed anymore than having a wonderful friend and reviewer like you! :)

I hope to have the next one out soon... then as soon as I figure it out, the last one. HA!

Thank you for a beautiful review, Mystress!

[tophatdance]

Woah.
I love the build-up Draco's intensity, how well you've inserted his thoughts into a re-telling (of sorts) of the plot. The books never really captured the cruel irony you've stated so perfectly in the line "...if Potter will realize the trials even lowly Death Eaters must suffer so that Saviors can live?". Very striking.

I'm really loving this fic! The one thing that I'm bringing up is the repetition of "Fucking Potter" -- while it totally works throughout the chapters to tie them all together, I felt that at the end of this chapter it lessened somewhat the powerful punch that Draco's thought conveyed, especially since it clearly illustrates his loathing/obsession with Harry. (I'm obviously in love with that sentence haha) Just a small detail though -- otherwise, lovely job :)

[lolafalola]

That's my favorite line of the whole series.

I'm glad you liked it. I'm hoping to put up the next chapter in a few days to a week... depending on real life commitments.

Thanks for the review!