Comments | lokeis_pen: Mental Laps, an SG-1 ficlet, J/D, PG

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Mental Laps, an SG-1 ficlet, J/D, PG

Mar 30, 2010 17:38

Mental Laps
Episode Tag for "The Fifth Race"

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jack o'neill, stargate, sg-1, jack/daniel, daniel jackson

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lokei April 1 2010, 01:40:39 UTC

*grin* Jack looks like there's just so much going on in his head in that episode, more than just the stuff he can't control.

I have no idea why it came out in 2nd person, I NEVER write 2nd person, but for some reason it worked better that way.

Glad you liked it! I'm easing back into writing more--it's kind of a relief to find out my brain's not utterly broken!

hsapiens March 31 2010, 00:59:52 UTC

*melts* Love this. It makes me crave the long post-Asgard fic but it's beautiful and complete as is. *squishes you*

lokei April 1 2010, 01:41:53 UTC

Hmmm...Now there's an idea. I had a possible Daniel-pov few sentences floating around in my head, perhaps I should see if there's any more in there.

(Love love LOVE your icon, btw)