Comments | loisarah: Help! Flashpoint fic help!

loisarah

Help! Flashpoint fic help!

Jan 05, 2012 12:07

Hey.

So I actually opened my fic and worked on it a bit this morning.

Should I give you all a minute to get up off the floor? ;)

( Cut just in case for spoilers for seasons 3 and the end of season 4 )

greg parker, flashpoint, ed lane

Comments 6

tristen84 January 6 2012, 21:01:50 UTC

>> I'm over thinking this, aren't I?

LOL! Yes, you are! I'm kidding ;o) Actually, I think it's really good you're thinking this through, but I think you can definitely make it work without having to rewrite anything; what you say in your post here makes perfect sense to me, at least!

>> So I actually opened my fic and worked on it a bit this morning.

Hee! That's great news! :oD *looks forward!*

loisarah January 6 2012, 22:30:50 UTC

It's kidding with a bit of truth, though, right? ;)

Well... I didn't actually work on anything you haven't already seen yet. =( Well, sorta, if you count newer plot bunnies, but not too much on those.

I meant to actually work on the Greg/Joanne one, but got sidetracked. What would you think of I maybe leave it ending where I did and make it a one shot? I'm torn between making it a longer fic dealing with custody and leaving it at the point I did, more open ended. I mean, we know how that turned out now, right?

Or, maybe different scenes along the path to Dean eventually living with Greg.... hmmmm....

tristen84 January 9 2012, 20:49:57 UTC

>> Well, sorta, if you count newer plot bunnies, but not too much on those.

Newer plot bunnies? *bounces!* ;o)

>> I meant to actually work on the Greg/Joanne one, but got sidetracked. What would you think of I maybe leave it ending where I did and make it a one shot?

Hm...I have to admit that I don't quite remember where exactly you left it at... Maybe you could send it along again?

>> Or, maybe different scenes along the path to Dean eventually living with Greg.... hmmmm....

Hmmm? ;oP I'd love to read how Dean went from occasionally visiting Greg to living with him. Like little slices of life, you know?

loisarah January 10 2012, 14:52:24 UTC

sent. =) no hurry, either.

I don't know if I can write the Greg and Dean scenes, but yes, I'd love to read that too! I'd love to see more and know more about their relationship!

acebullets January 8 2012, 03:30:09 UTC

Since we've never been told just how long Greg and Ed have been together on Team One, we can make any number of guesses about their SRU tenure ( ... )

loisarah January 15 2012, 19:32:27 UTC

It makes sense. =)

What you said all makes sense... I hope my version of events makes sense to anyone who reads the fic... if I finish it. The first half is in good shape.... the second? Not so much.