The Piano, chapter 1

[logastellus]

Comments

[whitewriter]

Love your syntax:

(A long swallow of lager prefaces the sort of abrupt subject change Wilson long ago became accustomed to.)

*YELLO* gah... *wishes she could write as such*

[logastellus]

Aw, you're going to make me all bashful. Seriously, major props to my beta, who helped polish that sentence. She will undoubtedly squee when she sees that it earned your admiration. Thanks for the feedback!

[whitewriter]

I love betas. When you find a good one, seriously: TREASURE THEM *sigh*... if only mine would respond (checks email for the millionth time... but its just been thanksgiving for you Americans so...)

[whitewriter]

btw. How do I friend you ? ;) (been visiting your LJ)