Chasing The Rogue - Chapter Seven

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Comments

[bima140277]

Your version is much better than the original ^_^

[kittenrescue]

Thank you. I think a Logan & Marie version would probably improve a lot of films. *g*

[paradisekendra]

I absolutely adore this chapter. So much covered with your artistic, crisp, non-lingering style. I go on and on when I try to write POVs, you get it smoothly across in the simplest words.

“Please don’t say that it shouldn’t have happened,” she said - almost pleadingly.

“I was about to tell you that I wish I hadn’t resisted you back at Lorenzo and Sophia’s,” he told her gently as he bent down and brushed a strand of hair off of her face.

I love Logan having a more tender, romantic side when he's with her, when he's in love. I enjoyed Erik/Marie's scene also.

Thanks so much for writing this! Amazing!