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FIC: One-Way Ticket On A Runaway Train - Chapter Four

Nov 23, 2011 07:37

( Revelations )

author: karen, universe: au, universe: x1 (x-men), rating: r, fic, genre: drama

Comments 4

jenefaner November 23 2011, 18:41:02 UTC

Wow..... This has so much angst written all over it. Nail biting. lol Great update!!!

paradisekendra November 23 2011, 23:59:55 UTC

“Are you sure it’s mine?”

“Say something else. Something better.”

Heee, that's such a great line. Powerful chapter! Everyone's feeling this pregnancy.

kittenrescue November 24 2011, 14:29:14 UTC

See, Logan's not the only one who sometimes puts his foot in his mouth. :)

I know that was a stereotypical response, but I really just had Scott say it so that Rogue could respond with the 'something better' line.

Yeah, this pregnancy is going to affect a lot of people.

paradisekendra November 24 2011, 19:50:50 UTC

Yeah, as the human race we all put our foot in our mouths---it's really frustrating.

But it brought forth a fantastic line! Loved it. :)