But at least Summers had brought along his girlfriend Emma, a stunning blonde who always seemed to be dressed in white - the same way Jubilee favored yellow.
Yayyyyyyyyyy! lol. COOL!
This was so awesome! I love how jealous Logan is, and the morality he gains when he's with Marie. Always a good thing. You write clearer than anyone! Geez. I'm so jealous. *glares teasingly*
I love the way you're writing Logan, it's fantastic. Marie's class and Logan's attitude are a total pair.
In my mind, Logan is experiencing a lot of firsts when it comes to Marie (love, jealousy, etc) which is a tad confusing for him. But I hope everyone is enjoying his journey of self-discovery.
And I'm trying to portray Marie as a classy young woman but hopefully she isn't coming across as a MarySue.
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Yayyyyyyyyyy! lol. COOL!
This was so awesome! I love how jealous Logan is, and the morality he gains when he's with Marie. Always a good thing. You write clearer than anyone! Geez. I'm so jealous. *glares teasingly*
I love the way you're writing Logan, it's fantastic. Marie's class and Logan's attitude are a total pair.
Great story! Loving it!
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In my mind, Logan is experiencing a lot of firsts when it comes to Marie (love, jealousy, etc) which is a tad confusing for him. But I hope everyone is enjoying his journey of self-discovery.
And I'm trying to portray Marie as a classy young woman but hopefully she isn't coming across as a MarySue.
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Not at all! She comes off classy and elegant with a lot of soul. She's fantastic. :)
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