Fic - Callous (Part 5)

[skybound2]

Title: Callous (Part 5/7)
Author: skybound2
Characters: Wolverine/Rogue (Logan/Marie), other assorted X-men.
Word Count: ~3000 this chapter (~15300 so far)
Rating: T
Summary: Rescued from a mutant experimentation facility, Rogue is left damaged.
Author's Note: Sorry for the slight delay in this one getting posted, but we are getting to the home

Comments

[kittenrescue]

Would you please actually post the chapters on this LJ instead of just a link to the WolverineandRogue one. I'm not a member of that community and sometimes I'd like to quote a specific segment of the story in my feedback, but I would have to keep bouncing back & forth between the two LJs. Thanks.

As for this chapter .....

There is a world of difference between being generally unpleasant to be around, and being downright homicidal.

Logan does tend to balance precariously on that line, doesn't he?

I really liked the action in this chapter. Very well written. In honor of that, I'm using the Wolverine claws icon. :)

I look forward to the next installment.

[skybound2]

Typically I don't like cross-posting the actual text to more than one community, as it makes revising later on more difficult, but since there are only a couple chapters left (and you've been so awesome with your regular commenting!) I think I can make an exception ;-) Next chapter will be posted to L&M as well! (Should be up today.)

I'm really glad that you liked the action in this chapter. I feel like the whole story needed a little bit of that, since there is just so much character introspection going on (that's my bread & butter really). Helps to break up the monotony.

And yes, Logan definitely walks a tight rope between the two. It's one of the reasons I adore him so. (I see your claws icon, with a claws icon :-D)

[kittenrescue]

Thanks. I look forward to reading the rest of this story.

I'm not very good at writing action scenes, so I tend to avoid them in my own stories - but I do appreciate them in other people's fics.

I really like all incarnations of Logan - he's such a fascinating character.

I'll see your claws icon and raise you a nametag. LOL

[skybound2]

I really like all incarnations of Logan - he's such a fascinating character.
Agreed!

(Ahh, I do not have a tag icon to call with, but maybe a kiss icon is of similar value :-D)