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ellashy May 6 2010, 10:35:54 UTC
So Hot!!... Loved it all... great job

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paradisekendra May 6 2010, 18:25:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I appreciate it. :)

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kittenrescue May 6 2010, 14:22:43 UTC
Even though I beta your fics, you know I love to visit them again as a reader - and this was a pleasure to read again. Fab fic, Kendra. *Bravo*

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paradisekendra May 6 2010, 18:27:01 UTC
Thanks so much, darling. You always point out something that I hadn't thought of, and I appreciate it. You've made me a much better writer. *hugs*

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kittenrescue May 6 2010, 18:43:05 UTC
Your writing is pretty clean - I never have much work to do. You're a good writer, Kendra - even without my help. But thank you for appreciating the small contribution that I make. :)

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paradisekendra May 6 2010, 18:59:54 UTC
Oy, lol. I never think it's clean. :) And you always point out something that has us both laughing. My fics could have their own blooper reel. So I don't think you make a small contribution because it's something so embarrassing that you point out that I'm incredibly grateful you help me change it before I put it out there. *hugs* Thank you so!

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golden_scarlett May 6 2010, 20:04:54 UTC
*computer catches fire from the hotness*

I liked that bit at the end especially, their little conversation. And I liked the idea of Logan strolling around the mansion looking for entertainment, I can so see that :P

Thanks, good work on your first PWP!

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paradisekendra May 6 2010, 20:32:34 UTC
Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you liked it. *smiles*

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