Last Call 2/?

[triaden]

Title: Space Hurts
Series: Last Call

Rating: PG 13
Verse: Post X3
Summary: When Logan turns to Marie, things go differently than expected.
Genre: Angst, Drama
Disclaimer: I do not own the X-men, Marvel does.
Author's Note: Back by popular Demand, this is the second part.

Comments

[triaden]

Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback!

[dutchxfan]

Stubborn girl.

I would've loved to see Marie in Logan's jacket. I bet she drowns in it. :) I think she should investigate his pockets. There should be a drawing in there still...

[triaden]

I think she would totally drown in it. But it's gotta be conforting. Also, I think she'd snag it every chance she got. Espically is she was moonstruck.

[golden_scarlett]

awwwaah! poor Marie, beating herself up to stay away from him :( I LOVE stories like this (- I'm so not one of those people who're like, 'oh make them come to their senses already!' I'm like, hell no, draw that angst out, I love it! *heh*)

So many bits I liked, nice writing. I liked it when she said he 'looked like home'. *sigh* I hear ya.

YAY there's another part.....

[triaden]

Yeah, she's got this huge mistaken complex. And I resent the fact that they can be together, but can't have angst. I *ppptttffffff* on that notion.

*grins* I'mm glad you liked it, there's more to come.

[tuilek]

Awwh, this is such a great story! ;^; I'm normally not a big fan of angst, but I absolutely adore this fic! Marie's POV makes it all so heartbreaking. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what'll happen to our little lovebirds. ♥

[triaden]

Thanks! I've got plans for much more. *grins*

[triaden]

Yep! There's all types of crazy stuff going on!