Bulletproof Soul - Part 5

[golden_scarlett]

So my weekend holiday turned into a freakin amazing week long road trip with good weather and all.  And I was right, the story wouldn't leave me alone so I took my lappy and cranked out a couple of chapters when I wasn't driving. Here's the first one, I hope you still like it.  It's still a bit of a tease but will post the next tomorrow once I look

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[meg1990]

I don't know whether to be sad for Logan or Marie. Logan SOOO needs to get over himself already and realize that Marie wants him and they belong together. As always, loved this chapter. Keep up the good work!

[eglvm]

AH! Part 6! Part 6!

[joanna_484]

Guhhh... So hot!

I wonder what Storm was going to tell Logan before he hung up, cutting her off. I'm thinking it was something important...

I love the bike ride over to the new hotel :D Really great descriptions of how Logan sees Marie's reflection in his mirror. And I love the idea of Logan's instinctive territorial nature urging him to gather up Marie and take her far away, somewhere safe where he can take care of her *sigh*

and instead, you call reception. You’ve got something you need to arrange.

I can't wait to find out what this means :D

That kiss is simply amazing! And the fact that you're dragging out the tension makes it even better :D

This is an amazing chap; I can't wait to reaad what comes next :) And I'm glad you had a good holiday :)

[alesia027]

No link to part 6? wimper, wimper. You should post this to the WRFA as well.

[golden_scarlett]

Oh whoops sorry :P just fixed it now, story should link thru if you'll still interested.

WRFA...is that at wolverinerogue.com? Ooh I don't know, I'm a little nervous. (or is that insecure!) Maaaybe once it's finished? But thanks so much for the comment!
x

[alesia027]

Oh you soo should, this is great. I have found part 7 & 8 and really looking forward to parts 9 & 10.

[the_great_lbmot]

Awww. That's all I can say. Awww.

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