A Coward's Way Out

[loco_lobo]

A Coward's Way Out

Wordcount: 1632
Rating: I'm gonna say NC17, but only because it's one hell of a dark piece. I'm talking lots and lots of dark. Suicide, drug abuse, serious shit.
Feedback: Hell yea! I didn’t post this thing for my health...well maybe I did.
Disclaimer: Actually...I do own everything here

It was four o’clock in the fucking

Comments

[angelsdee]

That was hard, babe, but beautifully written considering the subject. The pain, misery, and hopelessness was generated easily by the words and felt by me, the reader. I'm not crying but I feel empty inside like the words hollowed me out with the character's feelings.

Again, nicely written!