A baby ostrich

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So little
depends
on a
baby ostrich
drowning in the sea

The above was written by Vamsi, one of the teenagers on the YES! course I taught in late June. Isn't it an awesome poem? I love the sheer imagery of it.

Comments

[jayasankarvs]

Reminds me of The Red Wheelbarrow.

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:) Nice one although I must say that I like Vamsi's better!

[jayasankarvs]

Oh, I thought Williams' poem was really popular and your friend had been inspired by it.

[99kanitas]

I was about to say that :)
Back in HS we had to remember 30 something reasons as to why it's a poem.