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Title: Remember Death
Author: Locked_up_panda
Rating: PG
Prompt Set: 50.4
Prompt: 37
Word Count: 157
Summary: Oliver wanders there a house and remebers being with Percy
Warnings: Character death
Notes: morbid, which is odd, as I'm in a brilliant mood.
Remember Death
Oliver is alone in the house
The big old dusty house
Which Oliver is alone in
He’ ( Read more... )
Author: Locked_up_panda
Rating: PG
Prompt Set: 50.4
Prompt: 37
Word Count: 157
Summary: Oliver wanders there a house and remebers being with Percy
Warnings: Character death
Notes: morbid, which is odd, as I'm in a brilliant mood.
Remember Death
Oliver is alone in the house
The big old dusty house
Which Oliver is alone in
He’ ( Read more... )
Comments 2
I really liked -That hasn’t been touched in a twenty years- and -Away from a spot they swore would never be left alone-
You know how sometimes you write or read something and there are just certain sentences you really adore without knowing exactly why? Those two touched me like that.
I also liked:
They had been teenagers
Small and childish
And Alive
and I liked it even more when I realised the contradiction between 'Alive' and 'Death' when I'd finished it! I love it when there're little connections like that in a poem :)
Lastly I loved the ending -Before Death-. I don't usually see you using such a clear, obvious ending to your poems. I really like the strong closure to this one!
All in all, damn good!
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