Meme: Timestamp Commentfic

Oct 02, 2011 14:14

Choose one of my fics and give me a timestamp - e.g. two weeks before or five years later - and I'll write you a commentfic telling you what happened.

My fic masterlist can be found here. If and when I ever get more fic on it, I'll probably do this again (depending on the turnout). I've never done commentfic before, so we'll see how this works out

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elf_skitzo October 4 2011, 21:41:50 UTC
Eh hem. Penpals. Three years later.

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elf_skitzo October 10 2011, 04:05:23 UTC
D:

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1/? lobsterclaaaws October 13 2011, 02:09:45 UTC
>O FINE

Okay, so, we left off with Gerard and Mikey saying they're going to be moving down there together. Obviously Frank's going to be spending forever and a day with them. In three years time, Frank's probably going to be right in the middle of college, only he hates it. And he ends up, oh, I dunno, probably dropping out and crashing on their couch because he doesn't have a job and can't afford his own apartment and doesn't want to move back home. He wants to be in a BAND, and he can't do that living at home in his childhood bedroom. And Gerard and Mikey are totally awesome and let him crash on their couch. Yay couch!

And it sorta works for Frank in a few different ways. Because it means he has more control over the horrible Way hygiene habits, but it also means that he gets to see Gerard all the time. They're best friends, and now they get to live with each other and be roommates, too. And it's easier to, like, be in love with him, it doesn't hurt in that I'LL NEVER HAVE HIM sort of way, when he lives with the guy. But also it's ( ... )

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2/3 lobsterclaaaws October 13 2011, 02:11:11 UTC
He's lying on the couch, pretending to be asleep, because Gerard has a friend over. And by 'friend' I mean someone he's having sex with, DUH. And Frank's listening to how Gerard's moans are getting louder with each breath, loud enough that he doesn't even have to strain to hear them through the door. Mikey's probably got headphones on, since this is, y'know, kind of commonplace. And Frank can kinda tell that Gerard's getting a blowjob, because usually during actual sex, he's muffled, like he bites onto something or maybe kisses a lot, and Frank knows how weird and creepy it is that he knows all of this, whatever. Three years living on his couch pining for him, THREE YEARS, OKAY that's a long fucking time and also a lot of sex that Gerard has ( ... )

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3/3 lobsterclaaaws October 13 2011, 02:11:30 UTC
At first Frank's like, FUCK YEAH KISS, but then, wait, what? No. No, no, nonono. This isn't right, this isn't how it should go. So he gently eases Gerard away and shakes his head and is all, "We can't be doing this, Dude, not right after- Just, no, okay?" And Gerard takes his hand, but he doesn't look at Frank's face, and he says, "He left because I said your name instead of his."

And Frank just sort of. He just stares. Because what else can he even do? He's not even sure he heard that right. And Gerard was so straightforward about it, how can he even-

"What?"

But when Gerard says it again, it's the exact same words, and they sort of clink into place like a fucking Plinko machine or something (and maybe Frank watches a little too much Price is Right). He sort of has to force himself to ask his question, though, because as much as he hates looking a gift horse in the mouth, he needs to know that this isn't some weird rebound thing. And he sorta hates himself for thinking Gerard would use him as a rebound, he knows better than that, ( ... )

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Re: 3/3 elf_skitzo October 13 2011, 02:18:02 UTC
YOU

♥♥♥

All of it. Just. All. Of it. There is all kinds of perfect happening here. And win.

;_; ilu

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