Comments | lmx_v3point3: Fic: Shoot Me Down

lmx_v3point3

Fic: Shoot Me Down

May 24, 2011 21:58

Fic: Shoot Me Down ( Read more... )

fandom: leverage, character: ofc, music, musician: nancy sinatra, character: eliot spencer, fanfiction, verse: damien luvs evie, pairing: damien moreau/eliot spencer, type: pain/death/chaos, character: damien moreau

Comments 9

sheryden May 24 2011, 21:11:27 UTC

Ooh, I love it. I love the flow, and I like the glimpse into Moreau.

lmx_v3point3 May 24 2011, 21:13:43 UTC

I'm really glad the flow worked out alright. I was a bit worried. :S Thanks for the review :D

moonchildfic May 24 2011, 21:41:04 UTC

This is beautiful. It reads almost like a song if that makes any sense. There's depth in there and different perspectives and how blindsided Damien was by the betrayal but at the same time there's hints of the reasons why that can be understood even without the context of Eliot. Really good job.

lmx_v3point3 May 24 2011, 21:53:11 UTC

XD Thank you so much.

scout_lover May 25 2011, 02:13:20 UTC

Wow. Just … wow. So sweet and so sad and so powerful …

So … yeah. Wow.

daria234 May 28 2011, 02:44:15 UTC

That was great! I love how there's not just a simple situation of Damien being angry that Eliot wanted to stop killing. The scenes you describe are really evocative and great.

This is amazing... songbirdie_101 July 21 2011, 16:47:03 UTC

You rec'd this to me on The FicFinder's Job, and I had to review and you tell it's beautiful. Just so haunting. I love the way the story follows the song, and how the story itself is lyrical.

It's great writing that even though this is from Moreau's POV, you can see hints of why Eliot did that.

Very powerful, and the paragraph when they're older is just stunning. Amazing work! Thanks for the rec!:D

P.S. I love the icon of younger them! So cool! :)

Re: This is amazing... lmx_v3point3 July 21 2011, 18:11:27 UTC

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. The icon is a bit of a slap-dash job. I need to make a slightly better go at it at some point. XD