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[llanipsaammeg]

Thanks for reading :)

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Finally -- two o’ clock had never looked as good as it did to Emma at that moment. She made sure that the last customers of her shift were fully attended to; she indulged their tendency to change their minds about what to order, and their curious requests for extra condiments and cutlery. She smiled away their quibbling

Comments

[hpeek04]

WOW!!! Another great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens once the two get inside...I hope Jenny can find a way to open up to Emma and let her in!

[ptcruz]

This is getting very interesting. Jenny being aloof and somewhat 'cold' to Emma. Seeming to almost be pushing her away. I also want to see if Emma can get Jenny to let her in.
Nice job!

[jamster74]

Have I told you how much I enjoy your writing? Well I'll tell you again for good measure. Amazing!!!!! I love how Emma desperately tries to make Jenny open up. This is a great story. Really loving it!! More please! And quickly!!! :)

[lazerbug2006]

The ending line "The next thing she knew, Jenny was beside her, an explosion of perfume and bold colours.... I don't know why but this was an AWESOME bit to me! I look forward to more, please?! :)

[ext_1107917]

This story getting me addicted before I csn noticed! Can't wait for the new chapter! And this is kind of comfort when I am away snd can't get contact with my FB's family!!

2 hours!! That's a guideline to all Jemma fanfic writers!! LOL