Two people and... how many toes?

Jun 25, 2010 13:37

"Yeah," Mel huffed. She placed her hands on her hips and glared up at Harry, whose six odd feet frame towered over her barely five foot one.

Reading this, I can't help but think Harry is a short, squattish sort of guy with five left feet and one right foot.

I guess "odd feet" is right. Carry on, ficcer. For now.

fic:snark

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roseembolism June 25 2010, 21:12:29 UTC
And you know, if she had simply said "she glared up at Harry", it would have given the same effect without the details.

*sigh* fikkers.

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