Hee hee hee

Feb 22, 2010 09:15

From an FF.net fic summary:
What happens when you louse your family, your friends..? What happens when all you have left is pain and suffering? Kakashi knows... But what happens when you find that special someone that makes the sunshine shine even in the darkest of places?You know, once you have lice, it's very easy to louse your family and friends ( Read more... )

fic:snark, fic:badfic

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mullenkamp February 22 2010, 14:49:13 UTC
"when all you have left is pain and suffering"? Or just itching...

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llamabitchyo February 22 2010, 14:54:10 UTC
Just what I was thinking! :D

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the_cornettist February 22 2010, 16:08:32 UTC
How I have missed your fic snark :D

It couldn't have come at a better time either - work has been a complete PITA today.

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nopseud February 22 2010, 18:13:20 UTC
Oh, oh! What was the snark site which used to use the phrase 'Bathe In The Healing Light Of His Cock'? I feel that has to be what's going on here.

ETA: I'm pretty sure it was Slap To The Head Fanfiction Reviews.

ETA2: And it's a phrase which come from this Onion article.

ETA3: And out of all of that summary, the part which is distressing me most is the redundancy. Sunshine does not shine. The sun shines, to produce sunshine. That's why it's called 'sunshine' and not 'moonshine' or 'myarseshine'. That special someone makes the sun shine in the darkest places, and when they do, his arse those places are now full of sunshine. I guess at least they didn't say the sunshine had been shining for awhile.

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llamabitchyo February 22 2010, 18:38:14 UTC
Your edits are amusing me greatly, Sunshine! ;)

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