and the other one

Jan 11, 2009 00:07

Enjoy it Emjay! (Please don't kill me).

Tears from Polaris )

fic, boukenger, natsuki/masumi

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britin January 11 2009, 05:37:44 UTC
I should refrain from commenting before the person it was meant for but...I can't! Don't kill me either Emjay!

This was so sad! ::hugs:: But still enjoyable, I particularly liked the line about how Masumi had promised to protect her forever. It's certainly something he'd do and I can easily see him beating himself up and blaming himself for her being gone.

My favorite line was:

He wasn't going to forget her face anytime soon, but her mannerisms, the little things she did, the way she laughed - he was finding it harder to hold onto them.

I lost my Mom back in 1999 and I find the same thing to be true. I'll never forget what she looked like but things like her laugh, or the way her favorite perfume smelled...those fade to quickly.

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metaclipse07 January 11 2009, 07:45:44 UTC
Angsty, eh? *pulls trigger to squirt water on Lauren and Britin* Nice work. Reminds me of the people I grew to love who left too soon.

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zarahjoyce January 11 2009, 08:28:41 UTC
OMG WHY DID YOU DO THIS WHYYYYY T____T

I think the scene that affected me most is imagining a rock like Akashi breaking down.

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