That was beautiful, I loved Jared he melted my heart over and over again with his cute-ness, as did Jensen . very , very beautiful. And I'm kind of curious about the little dragon and brother coming into existence to o.O Lol!
I loved this! Poor Jared, so sure of everything and Jensen at first so clueless then so unsure. I am truly happy that they managed to figure things out.
I really liked the way you worked Jared's dragon courting methods in, he played it so subtle that Jensen never had a chance. I also liked your Chris and was glad that he finally came around to Jensen.
All in all, an adorable story with underplayed angst that did well in enhancing the romanticism of the story. Would have loved to know a little more about Jared's world, especially after the painting revelation. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much for that lovely thoughtful comment. I had fun with Jared's courting because obviously there was no way he was giving up on Jensen, but he was smart enough not to make it too obvious what he was up to, luckily. ;p
Jared's world--gosh, there is *so* much of this story missing. Both sets of parents should have appeared along with a trip to Jared's homeland, lots more physical dragon!Jared along and an epilogue of them a few years down the line. Unfortunately, RL problems meant I didn't have anywhere near enough time so all that was dropped. Maybe I'll pull all the bits and pieces together and sort out some timestamps or a sequel, but we'll see.
So charming and such a delight to read! Even when I was worried about what was happening, I had hope. Jared was a delight, and Jensen was as well. Even if Jensen wasn't "other-worldly," he had dealt with a lot in his life.
I loved them both and thought this was wonderful. Thank you!
Thank you so much, and I'm glad you liked both of them, even though Jensen was a bit slow figuring things out! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed!
That was drop dead gorgeous. So romantic and warm. You gave your characters many dimensions and let the reader fall in love along with them. I enjoyed this story. If possible, please consider doing a timestamp or sequel. I didn't want to story to end. I want to see more of these two.
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I really liked the way you worked Jared's dragon courting methods in, he played it so subtle that Jensen never had a chance. I also liked your Chris and was glad that he finally came around to Jensen.
All in all, an adorable story with underplayed angst that did well in enhancing the romanticism of the story. Would have loved to know a little more about Jared's world, especially after the painting revelation. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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Jared's world--gosh, there is *so* much of this story missing. Both sets of parents should have appeared along with a trip to Jared's homeland, lots more physical dragon!Jared along and an epilogue of them a few years down the line. Unfortunately, RL problems meant I didn't have anywhere near enough time so all that was dropped. Maybe I'll pull all the bits and pieces together and sort out some timestamps or a sequel, but we'll see.
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I loved them both and thought this was wonderful. Thank you!
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I am glad you participated in the big bang.
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Yes, may well be a timestamp or sequel coming as there was so much I missed out I've got plenty to work on! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed!
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