Fidelity (WonKyu Drabble)

[lizziepro]

Title: Fidelity
Pairing: WonKyu
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Summary: Kyuhyun's vocabulary is only filled with meaningless words. Siwon knows what's happening.

a/n: this is weird, but the first line is directly out of a French movie I watched recently. I need to get back into posting on here~

Comments

[shayepuree]

Ooh.

So, this fic.
I really love this concept -- of language and honesty and change and all of that. I like how Kyuhyun uses lofty words to distance himself from the situation and from Siwon. That feels very real and human. Though I feel so bad for Siwon, bahhh. Because you know he'd do everything he could to make it work. But if Kyuhyun's being like that, then there's nothing he can do. It's over. And that sucks. ㅠㅠ

I really love this part:
[Unfortunately, when he uttered the phrase "I don't think we should invest an extensive amount of prudence on the subject of maintaining fidelity in our relationship, Siwon", he meant "I don't think we should just see each other" a layer or so under the surface, but at the core he meant, "I don't want to be with you anymore."]
Because you can see the layers peel off, one by one. And because you can also see how well Siwon understands Kyuhyun, even if he doesn't like what he's saying.

[lizziepro]

yeah dude. i've always had this issue with people who you can just tell use a lot of more intricate and complex words just to cover up for something, and then that line hit in the movie and i was like BOOM. YES.
and exactly, even language changes in a relationship when something's wrong/off, or even more toward the opposite positive end. you know? and yeah, always feeling bad for siwon~ ;A; he just gets kyu, but kyu is a fucking brat. ^^;;
not mad. ^.^ i figured you'd like this one. 0000

[saravy]

Bad Kyu. Poor Siwon, I feel bad for him. Kyu is being a coward and not being strait in what he's saying and in return it is prolonging Siwon's pain.

This is definitely different and that's refreshing. I'm not used to reading breakup fics so this was a nice change of pace. This was really well written and I like your use of words and Kyu's and Siwon's characterization. It felt very real. Great job!^^

[lizziepro]

mhmmm, exactly. with breakups, a lot of times i hear people talking about how the ex was "fake" or "not themselves", but they would say things in the same manner or act the same. so i wanted to actually materialize that fakeness and exploit the drastic change that can happen through his word choice.
idk it made it more real and grounded for me ^^;;
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Especially since it is a breakup fic and i'm always scared to post them. ^^;; Thanks for reading~