Dead to the World (18/X)

[lizparker6]

Comments

[the_lucky_ducky]

I must have told you before: I love this story.

What I think I haven't told you before: Your characterization is brilliant. I can really see all of them in my mind, hear them, and it just feels right. This is how they'd react, this is what they'd say.

Just one tiny little thing: I guess Jenny wouldn't refer to Ryan as "Ryan" but as "Kevin". (Although it's kind of weird in my head too, because he simply is Ryan. Damn the man for having a last name that sounds like a first name.)

[lizparker6]

Thank you. Oh, what a praise to tell me you like the characterization, really.:) YAY! DAMN, you are SOOO right about the Ryan thing, how stupid of me not to think of it! THANKS!!

[ninjamonkey73]

I'm awful about leaving reviews, but since you said we had to...

I really love how you brought Javi around in this chapter. The whole piece has been believable and, not gonna' lie, when I see a new chapter, I tend to drop everything (work, parenting, etc) to read it as soon as I can. :)

[fanficjunkie12]

I do the same thing, drop everything and "run" to read it. So, so good!

[lizparker6]

Oh you two, now STOP IT, will you!!! *blushes*

[lizparker6]

Lol, dont worry about that mandatory part, that was just another AN - its really hard to come up with those for each chapter, like you wouldnt believe.;)

And lol, next chapter is happening about ... NOW! Three, two, one, GO! :D

[thefallingapple]

Yay! Another update. I really love the way that Castle is there for Beckett in this chapter. She made a conscious decision to be there for what he needed, to not push and to be open with him, but here, when she's in a difficult situation, he's the one who backs her up. And Esposito and Ryan are adorable too. Thanks for sharing this and I'm looking forward to more.

[lizparker6]

Thank you! More is coming right now.;)

[amycooper]

When I got to the part were Espo cries, I did too.

[lizparker6]

Ooh, you...*hands you a handkerchief*