Comments | lizparker6: Dead to the World (3/X)

lizparker6

Dead to the World (3/X)

Jun 18, 2012 00:02

fic: dttw, fanfiction, castle/beckett, castle, dead to the world

Comments 10

mika30 June 17 2012, 22:51:02 UTC

Hey,
I'm first to comment and that makes me feel great :) Anyway, I like the way you wrote his grief - total and blinding pain. This is a heavy stuff, but really good. Also the fact that his last book is crap selling through the roof - I mean, I couldn't see him wrting anything good without Kate. What can I say - very good chapter and I'm waiting for more!

lizparker6 June 20 2012, 18:25:06 UTC

Hello. Thank you again for the nice words. The next chapter is already on its way.:)

sillyluvsrw June 18 2012, 07:24:12 UTC

I liked this chapter, as well as the first two. However, somehow, I hate it too. It's not like the other two chapters where your writing just left me numb, no, this... urgh, I don't even know how to describe it.
Just... keep writing this, okay? Because I really, really like it.

lizparker6 June 20 2012, 18:26:50 UTC

Hello there and thank you.:) I know, I am mean and cruel with this story, it just happened that way, i know its a lot of angst to take in. but i feel like its better to dissect the pain than just jump through the hoop and have them together and happy, whats the point of making the suffer in the first place then?:)

Anyway, I am keeping writing this, no worries. Chapter 4 is already on its way.:)

sillyluvsrw June 20 2012, 18:29:01 UTC

That sounds good. I'm really looking forward to chapter 4! :)

mig991 June 18 2012, 14:39:13 UTC

Now comes the hard part. Can't wait.

Good luck, and keep up the good work!

lizparker6 June 20 2012, 18:27:39 UTC

Hello, adn thank you. :) And your wait is over, the next chapter is already on its way.:)

amycooper June 19 2012, 13:19:59 UTC

It is sad, you are bad and I love it! LOL Keep writing because this is good.

And...hate to bring it up but you have the same problem with lack of spaces between words peppered throughout this section too.

lizparker6 June 20 2012, 18:29:08 UTC

Hey there and thank you.:) I am keeping writing, no worries there.:) And dang, how come those stupid spaces keep happening???So sorry for that. Unfortunatelly, i cannot guarantee it wont happen in the future..sorry.. BUT, as a little apology, the next chapter should be up soon.:)

amycooper June 21 2012, 14:33:44 UTC

No, I'm not upset. If you want I can stop pointing it out. I've had the same problem in the past copy and pasting from Word on some message boards.