007 - Heaven

[lizas_lines]

When Bella Jones finally left the side of her son, she found herself in heaven.

She hadn’t been expecting that.

There were clouds and wings and shimmering golden rings above people’s heads that were almost invisible. There was music and laughter and wine and chocolate and buildings of white limestone. There were gods and goddesses, playing board

Comments

[originalpuck]

I like that you're carrying over the repetition concept.

I really like Bella's personality, and she looks like she'll be a really interesting character to see some more of. ^^

[lizas_lines]

Bella is the greatest, yesh *nods* I'm looking forward to writing more of her. She is kickass.

So glad you like it. And I'm not sure how much more of it will keep the repetition style, but I'm going to try and leave it like that.

[anonymous]

"There were gods and goddesses, playing board games with men’s lives" you have such greatly original ideas

[lizas_lines]

Yay! Thank you, Ellen.