this is the first draft of the second story i wrote this semester. questions, comments, suggestions?

please forgive the spaces between paragraphs.

( working title: cleansed )

this is the completed second draft of the story just posted.

i do intend to keep working on this. questions, comments, suggestions? there are a few things i already know need to be changed, such as the way other people find out about Lani's condition, but any other comments are welcome.

( about 14 pages double-spaced )

i have been writing this semester, just haven't taken the time to post anything.

i worked on a story from last semester. the first draft can be found here. this is the first six pages of the second draft, which i changed when i continued, but here it is anyway. again, please forgive the spaces between paragraphs; i don't know how to indent on LJ ( Read more... )

just some revisions.

i like this one pretty well:
( floored - second draft )

not a very good story, but it was damn fun to write. and to be honest, i rather like it.

the assignment was to write a revenge story.

i need a better title.

questions, comments, suggestions?

(once again, please forgive the spacing between paragraphs. the pre tag doesn't seem to want to work.)

( splashed )

this one is supposed to have been a triangle story, between three people, with some kind of pull between the three. i didn't quite use three people. the story didn't turn out the way i wanted, but it's a first draft, and it's appearing to be on its way.

sorry for the length, it's rather long.

comments, suggestions, questions?

( red on white )

i wrote this when i was sick, so if it feels a little incomplete, it's because i preferred laying down to writing.

but anyway. exploring a new style. let me know how it works. it's about four pages long, double-spaced. suggestions, questions, comments?

( Floored )

by request, here is the entire play. i've tweaked it a bit in places, but otherwise it's pretty much the same. it is 23 pages long.

i've tentatively titled it The Light is Above Us.

comments and suggestions are, as always, welcome.

( the complete version )

oh man. i am having an amazing time writing this.

okay, this is the second half of the play i'm writing this semester. the first part can be found here.okay. major question: does the ending work ( Read more... )

this was possibly the hardest fiction assignment i've ever had to cough up ( Read more... )