from advanced fiction

[lizardscrawls]

this is the second draft of the third story i wrote this semester. i'm not sure if this is the way i want this idea to go, but i'm fairly pleased with how it turned out. still needs a lot of work, though, and any comments, questions, and suggestions are welcome. please forgive the paragraph spacing

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Reflection

[anonymous]

I loved reading this story. It left me wanting more.
love you much,
mombocombo :)