You know, I'm not usually that big into haikus, but this is awesome! The whole 'pending-motherhood' metaphor you've got going is really nice--at least, I hope that's what you were going for, because otherwise, I sort of sound like an idiot...hah! But regardless of your meaning, I really like your haiku, and I thought I'd take a minute to let you know! Take it easy, and have a great day!
P.S. I especially like the use of the verb "stagger." That's an awesome verb!
I was makin' a mommy reference - because I used to do 6 miles in an hour, every day. Now? Now I can barely manage four with our border collie and he's waaaaaaaay ahead of me. I'm like an elephant clumbering after him
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P.S. I especially like the use of the verb "stagger." That's an awesome verb!
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I was makin' a mommy reference - because I used to do 6 miles in an hour, every day. Now? Now I can barely manage four with our border collie and he's waaaaaaaay ahead of me. I'm like an elephant clumbering after him
An elephant in v. nice runners, mind. ^_^
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