Comments | liz_marcs: Dark Xander: Nobody Never Gets to Heaven; Part 2/?

liz_marcs

Dark Xander: Nobody Never Gets to Heaven; Part 2/?

Oct 08, 2006 21:03

Didn't get a chance to work on Facing the Heart in Darkness, but since ( Read more... )

fanfiction: 2006, character: faith, character: spike, character: buffy, fanfiction: fic-a-thon, fanfiction: nobody never gets to heaven, character: oc, character: xander, character: kennedy, fanfiction: buffy the vampire slayer, character: willow, character: ensemble

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set_aka_ian October 9 2006, 01:33:08 UTC

[quote] Yes, I'm blaming nwhepcat. Shut up. [/quote]

Well then, I must remember to thank nwhepcat, too. Holy freaking yikes. Liz does Spike. Liz does *slash.* My world is all askew!

liz_marcs October 9 2006, 02:07:11 UTC

It's a sign of the apocalypse. Or something like that.

debxena October 9 2006, 02:20:18 UTC

*whistles* That's one fucked-up Xander. With a a square-peg soul.

Really interesting stuff :)

liz_marcs October 9 2006, 03:03:57 UTC

And your icon is so appropos, too. :-)

No, Xander is so not dealing well with the whole vampire thing. Not. At. All.

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liz_marcs October 9 2006, 03:03:01 UTC

*pokes* I think you had some feedback on this part, like trimming the scene. (You weren't the only one, either.) None of the cut paragraphs were missed.

*pets crazy vampXander*

iyalode October 9 2006, 02:54:05 UTC

Xander's slow progression in this is so damned fine. In a homicidal nutty vampire way. I'm just so bowled over by how you tracked this with his change of description of the target.

That control? Rice paper is thicker.

Ms Willow went into uber fix it mode didn't she. Makes me wonder what else she tucked away in Xander for future use.

liz_marcs October 9 2006, 03:01:47 UTC

In a homicidal nutty vampire way

Bwah!

That control? Rice paper is thicker

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Sorry. Those two lines so totally made me laugh out loud.

Not that I'm making excuses for Xander or anything, but idiot-head half-starved himself by not feeding for 5 days. This is exactly what Spike told him would happen.

Still, yeah, Xander is borderline nuts on his best of days. Him not eating is not helping.

And, yeah, Willow went into uber magical fix-it mode. First it was the soul. Then it was the eye. Then it was all those orders to keep Xander from dusting himself.

set_aka_ian October 9 2006, 03:14:56 UTC

[quote] And, yeah, Willow went into uber magical fix-it mode. First it was the soul. Then it was the eye. Then it was all those orders to keep Xander from dusting himself. [/quote]

Gosh, and that *always* ends well, what with the eventual conflicting imperatives thing.

The day Xander *has* to leap into certain death to save someone, as Xander is wont to do, and *can't* because of Willow's magics, oh, that's just angst-on-a-cracker. Yum.

nwhepcat October 9 2006, 03:36:52 UTC

::meep::

Whoa. Whoa. What happens in Vegas.

Dayum. This is the good stuff. Thanks for letting me wheedle you into more!