Comments | liz_estrada: Fic: Charge of the Lite Brigade | WMC | Lindsay/Cindy

liz_estrada

Fic: Charge of the Lite Brigade | WMC | Lindsay/Cindy | PG-13

Nov 29, 2007 20:19

Comments 61

shaych_03 November 30 2007, 04:46:23 UTC

this? pure goodness :) loved it :) it was fluffy and light without being smarmy and too sugary :) thank you for sharing :)

liz_estrada December 1 2007, 18:08:45 UTC

I like the nice, kissyface stories sometimes, but I fear causing diabetic comas, so I *tried* to limit the sweeteners. Thanks for reading. :)

shaych_03 December 1 2007, 18:11:36 UTC

well, to be honest, i'd prefer a diabetic coma over an angst-o-rama. :)

blienky27 November 30 2007, 05:15:17 UTC

This was absolute and utter perfection. Like...I don't even know! *flaily hands*

I mean, first you have the whole awkward 'bathroom sex' thing, and Cindy's They brought personal electrical appliances into the workplace bathroom? Gross and I’m going to Costco tonight and buying a gallon of Purell… And the characters sound more like them then they do on the show sometimes.

And that final scene in the Costco is the best get-together scenario of all time. The banter! The dud!first!kiss! The super-hot second kiss! THE BANTER!

So, in summary - *flail*, hot! and well characterized.

blienky27 November 30 2007, 05:19:31 UTC

PS - Your title makes me a happy geek. While I was reading, all I could think was "Half a case, half a case,
Half a case solving,
All in big badass city
Worked the club members."

Which, you know, doesn't even rhyme, or follow the original pattern, but it made my inner dork very, very happy.

triniliyah November 30 2007, 09:54:12 UTC

i love your icon! 'nobody expects the spanish inquisition' heehee comfy chair ad soft cushion torture lol

liz_estrada December 1 2007, 18:09:43 UTC

Hee! over both the Python icon AND that poem filk. Glad you enjoyed it.

thisbequeerchik November 30 2007, 05:21:13 UTC

OH.

MY.

GAWD.

LOVE it and honestly? I would be DELIGHTED with more. SERIOUSLY. Like, NOW.

Also, I'm friending you.

liz_estrada December 1 2007, 18:10:47 UTC

Friend away. :) Glad you liked it.

random_flores November 30 2007, 05:40:02 UTC

Just awesome. Really well put together, and perfect characterization. A joy to read!

liz_estrada December 1 2007, 18:11:59 UTC

Thanks much!

shatterpath November 30 2007, 05:57:09 UTC

That.
Was.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
I burst out laughing at least five times in the read. You are hearby the Goddess of Banter (TM)

DAMN that was funny!

liz_estrada December 1 2007, 18:13:15 UTC

Great to hear that! I live in fear of making my stoopid little jokes and hearing crickets.