Fic: Death and Syntaxes | WMC | Lindsay/Cindy | R

[liz_estrada]

Comments

[thrace_]

The dialogue! The dialogue! Did I mention I love the dialogue?

It's like you injected the show right in the vein with some Veronica Mars.

And I take it you find Ashe about as creepy as I do.

[liz_estrada]

Oh, crap. You invoked VMars. I worship that show (and cuddle my DVDs every now and again), so that's big-time praise. Thank you.

I didn't find Ashe creepy until the attic scene, when he seemed touched and impressed that Lindsay kept an entire room in her home dedicated to his - err, make that KMN's crimes. Then he got all "You can't get rid of me that easily," and it turned a corner for me. If the show doesn't come back and I keep writing this stuff, I'm gonna have a tough time seeing him as anything but shady.

[ifuwereafrog]

"impressed that Lindsay kept an entire room in her home dedicated to his - err, make that KMN's crimes."

Oh no! He's not a Kyle Craig is he!? :( I hate bad FBI agents!

[liz_estrada]

Oh no! He's not a Kyle Craig is he!? :( I hate bad FBI agents!

What better cover is there for a pattern killer? In fiction, anyways. IRL, I'm more wary of the petty tyrants (people like Dennis Rader - BTK - who was an animal control Nazi). The Ashe thing wouldn't surprise me, as KMN is likely either him or Tom (gasp!).

[lilwitchy]

Awesome-laughing-out-loud moments:

former Mr. Lindsay Boxer

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“Man, I am so glad I don’t have his job,” Lindsay declared.

Jacobi sipped his tea and muttered through the steam. “Not half as glad as the rest of us.”

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I case you couldn't tell from the rest of this comment: I ADORED this. There'll be more, right?

[liz_estrada]

Thank you! Glad I LOL'd you. And I'm still having a good time writing WMC, so we'll see how it goes.

[liz_estrada]

Thanks for reading and commenting, as it's always nice to hear the story turned out okay. Joe F. is not the problem here, though - they must have told that boy to act vaguely skeezy and boy, did he, so Ashe now has my doubt & fear stuck all over him.

[rebakathy]

I liked this story a lot. The Linday/Cindy interaction as well as everyone else is really good. The FBI guy seems vageuly creepy to me but maybe we'll see something different later down the road. Very nice!

[liz_estrada]

Thanks - glad to know you enjoyed it. :)

[so_wicked]

It took me a couple of stories to put it together, but now I am certain: you are Lindsay to my Cindy. I want to be just like you... when I grow up.

[liz_estrada]

Aww, sweetie. XX Thanks. *G*