We'll Reinvent Love [1/10]

[livinglifeloud]

Title: We’ll Reinvent Love
Rating: hard R
Pairing: Ryden
Summary: He remembers back when he was younger, and he would scrape his elbow and, because he hadn’t yet started these daily screaming matches with his mom, she would place a band-aid over it, ever so gently, and then an even gentler kiss on top of that. And because Ryan looks like his world

Comments

[lucyjayneee]

"I've never written slash before, let alone a sex scene."

Are you kidding me?! That was amazing.
HOT. YES.

[livinglifeloud]

haha everyone keeps not believing that, it's flattering.
thank you!

[fueledbyaudrey]

I don't believe you've never written slash or sex before, this was so amazing! I can't wait to read this rest!

This was better than some writers who have been here before.

[livinglifeloud]

aww thank you. there are some pretty incredible writers here though, i always read and feel like an epic fail haha.
next chapter is up later today :)

[hey_tango]

if this was indeed you're first it was very well written and good.
I liked this a lot
good job! =]

[livinglifeloud]

thank you!

[monamour_x]

i don't beeeeliiieeeevveee you. lol. that is too INCREDIBLE for being your first time writing sex hahaha. really amazing job. ;)

He remembers back when he was younger, and he would scrape his elbow and, because he hadn’t yet started these daily screaming matches with his mom, she would place a band-aid over it, ever so gently, and then an even gentler kiss on top of that.

And because Ryan looks like his world is one big scraped elbow at the moment, Brendon leans forward and kisses him, butterfly-soft, and pulls away before Ryan gets a chance to do it first.

i know thats in your summary, but whatever. lol i love that bit...so, there. hahahaha.

very well done! i really enjoyed this. :D

[livinglifeloud]

thank you!
yeah that's my favorite part too :P it's written about me and an ex-boyfriend, except ryden-ified haha.

[lyricsof_poison]

you're a liar, that can't possibly be your first piece?
i loved every word of it
<3

[livinglifeloud]

thank you so much :)
yeah, i've written a couple het stories on mibba, and i've been reading slash for a year, but this was the first time i decided to try it myself...i've been listening to northern downpour for like a week straight now, so.