Comments | livin4hymn: Day 30: Not the end, just another beginning.

livin4hymn

Day 30: Not the end, just another beginning.

Apr 30, 2009 23:56

Last day of BEDA, huh? I was kinda hoping it would feel special or something. I do feel a sense of relief though, knowing I won't have this self-imposed obligation hanging over me. I did have fun with it though until maybe the last few days...at least on the writing side of it. The reading part was great, seeing so many people interact and read ( Read more... )

veda, friends, beda, awkward, story, dancing, final

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miner_beth May 1 2009, 22:44:59 UTC

For some reason, this didn't show up on my friends page. Weird.

I really enjoyed the story, though. I was really interested while reading. I would only suggest to "make it new." The "ugly/nerdy" boy or girl somehow getting to go out with the "hot/popular" girl or boy is a common plot. Add your own twist to it and be sure to keep lots of conflict in the story to keep the reader interested.

livin4hymn May 1 2009, 23:01:40 UTC

Ya, it did that for me after I updated the post time so it didn't get lost in friend feeds.

I was thinking of adding in some conflict towards the end of this scene, but I was tired by time I got as far as I did. Don't even know if I'll follow through on this story b/c I only had the intention of doing a short story for the end of BEDA. But I did enjoy doing this, so who knows. Thanks for the advice either way! =)