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Fic: Okaeri, Gen

Mar 31, 2009 20:49

Title: Okaeri
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Not written with any in mind, other than some definate hinted Gin/Ran.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some language (Renji XD)
Summary: Once a year, everyone returnes to their 'home' in a tradition older than most of them.
Word count: 5760 (O.o)
Diclaimer: Bleach belongs to Tite Kubo, I just like to play with his characters.
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character: matsumoto rangiku, character: yamada hanatarou, pairing: gen, character: kyouraku shunsui, character: kotetsu isane, fandom: bleach, character: kotsubaki sentarou, character: kuchiki rukia, character: ayasegawa yumichika, character: madarame ikkaku, character: zaraki kenpachi, fanfiction, character: ichimaru gin, character: kotetsu kiyone, character: ukitake jyuushiro, character: hitsugaya toushirou, character: hinamori momo, character: tousen kaname, character: aizen sousuke, character: soifon, character: abarai renji, character: kira izuru, character: kuchiki byakuya, character: hisagi shuuhei, character: ise nanao, character: unohana retsu, rating: pg-13

Comments 2

ceestar March 31 2009, 22:20:54 UTC

Oooh Mary that was so beautiful~!!! I loved it, thank you so much, I don't deserve friends like you~ ♥

The descriptions were lovely, and I understand Yumichika and Ikkaku's scene fairly well, it was very sweet, as was everyone else's. I love how at first there were some pretty obvious pairings (not necessarily raburabu pairings, just, pairs), and then it moved to more subtle ways that made me go "aw, that's right, well that's nice~"

I adore the Japanese traditions of 'tadaima' and 'okaeri', you gave a lovely Fruits Basket like feel to this, and we all know what a big success that series is.

-showers you with love and confetti-

uliente April 12 2009, 03:34:02 UTC

Wow...I seriously love this! Not only did you manage to include a LOT of the characters...they're all wonderfully IC! I liked that this was a longer piece. I didn't get bored with it. And Renji and Kira's escapade throughout the fic was definitely amusing. XD I liked how you tied everything together at the end with them, Hinamori and Hisagi. And the exchange between Kira and Hanatarou was a pleasant surprise. I've always loved the thought of them interacting. XP And Sentarou and Kiyone! I love their...different relationship. XD
I did spot a typo:

"“Okaeri.” Kiyone hiccupped, and promptly feel off the desk she was perched on"

Feel=fell xP
I also think that "hiccuped" has only one p.

Overall...uwaaah, this was so great to read! I loved it! Your fics never fail to impress me. X3 ♥