Fic: [BLEACH] Waiting for You (gen)

Nov 21, 2012 00:47

Title: Waiting for You
Fandom: BLEACH
Characters: Kuchiki Byakuya, Abarai Renji, (mentions of) Kuchiki Rukia
Rating: T
Warnings: SPOILERS FOR CHAPTER 515. Angst. One character is in a coma. Future fic
Disclaimer: BLEACH belongs to Kubo Tite and related companies, I just like to play with his characters.
Summary: Every day, for longer than he cared ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing: gen, fandom: bleach, character: abarai renji, character: kuchiki rukia, angst, character: kuchiki byakuya, rating: pg-13

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bloodandpepper November 21 2012, 10:57:59 UTC
Stories like this one are the main reason I still love this fandom.

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live_with_love November 21 2012, 13:57:51 UTC
Thank you so much! This comment made me incredibly happy and I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

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drabbleandfluff November 21 2012, 17:15:59 UTC
This is indeed gorgeous, I like how you've shown the stages of Renji's grief (anger, bargaining, acceptance...) and the way he's grown over the years. 'The haori is heavy today' said so much, and was so heartbreaking!
Lovely! :)

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live_with_love November 21 2012, 19:13:43 UTC
Ok, I actually had to sit for an hour and think about how to answer your comment XD You see, your Renji/Byakuya fics were some of the first to get me into the pairing and I've meant to go back and comment on some of your older stuff to tell you so, but somehow RL gets in the way every time I want to sit down and reread so I can put my feelings into words. I adore your Renji <3
So, thank you! It means a heck of a lot to me that you enjoyed my fic :3
I enjoyed taking Renji through those stages and bringing him back from the edge; getting into his head for his interactions with Byakuya is always incredbly interesting. And that's one of my favourite lines, too :)
Thank you again! <3

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drabbleandfluff November 24 2012, 01:02:47 UTC
I always anticipate other writers' take on the dynamic between Renji and Byakuya-- it's the nuances we put into their relationship that kind of make them our own. XD I don't think two people ever write them the same way, so it makes it enjoyable (haha.. and sometimes challenging) to find a fic that resonates, you know? :)
You have Renji maturing and growing into his captaincy here, it's a quiet piece and is poignant with his regard and devotion for Byakuya so strong even after six years... you captured his loss really well.

and thank you so much for the kind words! :D I'm glad enjoyed them! XD

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crimson_ainee November 22 2012, 19:30:12 UTC
This is really touching. The way you transition from the years in interesting, especially that you do it through emotions rather than flashbacks. I adore it. ^^

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verduister November 23 2012, 18:47:37 UTC
Beautiful <3

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rogi37 November 23 2012, 19:27:16 UTC
oh gosh, my heart stopped beating just a moment ago. Thats such a wonderful story, the teapot, Renji coming there every day to make that damn tea for Byakuya, I love you so much for writing such a wonderful story.

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