I think you just broke my heart. When I read about Alex's Freudian slip, it made my stomach ache. Maybe it's me, maybe I'm just dumb, but that the last thing I'd imagined it would happen. I honestly didn't expect that
( ... )
Awh babe, I'm sorry this made you upset. I mean, from a writer's perspective that is so amazing that you got that emotionally invested and I'm extremely flattered. But I swear I'm a nice person and I am totally rooting for these characters. (I definitely got emotional myself when writing it
( ... )
Maybe you're right. At first when you mentioned there was supposed to be a Freudian slip, the first thing I thought was the slip during sex. But then after you wrote it, I thought that that we were in the clear and that I was wrong and then, you threw that curve ball at me. Plus, is it really necessary for Sammy to make an appearance? Alex can be over and done with him, without having him present in flesh, right? *tries to convince you and herself* And sorry what was that? "I really really hope you can stomach through the rest of this story. " Duh. Obviously. I just said this kind of broke my heart. This story is a masterpiece, my all time favorite, there's no way I'm going to stop reading it. But it does make me feel better the fact there will be a sugary sweet epilogue (I already took into account the fact that there's going to be more heartache). Thanks for your concern for the test, you are a sweetheart.
I reread this more than I'd ever admit, and everytime Jack just gets to me. Like, is he in love with Alex or not? From noted actions, being startled into speechless behaviour obviously says something, but all this denial is gonna fuck everything up.
I swear everytime I read a new update, I get breathless and stunned all over again. Your writing is impeccable, and beautifully detailed. You explain such simple things in such an extraordinary way, that it's complex and new. You're the writer I aspire to be someday. By the way, that sex scene, *phew wipes face* man, I bow down to you. I would freak out more bout Alex slipping up, or Jack getting in way too deep and yadda yadda but so many key moments happened that if I addressed them all, I'd be writing forever and you'd get bored. I don't want this to fic to end, but the end is near! I cannot wait for the next update. Cheers!
I just need to interject and add : your sex scene was literal perfection. Your entire writing is literal perfect. Half the reason I dont want this story to end is because I just love reading your writing THAT MUCH. okay thats all :$
We used to work at IHOP together
anonymous
September 5 2014, 17:45:03 UTC
This might seem random but I'm looking for a girl named karissa jones. The only thing I have to go on is that she writes/wrote All Time Low, erotic fiction.
Comments 13
Reply
Reply
Reply
Plus, is it really necessary for Sammy to make an appearance? Alex can be over and done with him, without having him present in flesh, right? *tries to convince you and herself*
And sorry what was that? "I really really hope you can stomach through the rest of this story. " Duh. Obviously. I just said this kind of broke my heart. This story is a masterpiece, my all time favorite, there's no way I'm going to stop reading it. But it does make me feel better the fact there will be a sugary sweet epilogue (I already took into account the fact that there's going to be more heartache).
Thanks for your concern for the test, you are a sweetheart.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment