The Right and The Wronged (1/2)

[live_by_lyrics]

Title: The Right and The Wronged (1/2)
Author: Gess akalive_by_lyrics
Pairing: Alex Gaskarth/Jack Barakat
P.O.V.: first person Alex Gaskarth
Rating: R
Warnings: Excessive swearing, offensive commentary about women and religion, violence with weapons and death.
Summary: An officer watches the enemy die.
Disclaimer: This story and its author are in no way affiliated or

Comments

[live_by_lyrics]

Awwhh, yeah, this fic isn't exactly fluffy goodness...but I hope you give it a try! Some of my favourite things ever written were ones that completely grossed me out or made me cry so yeah. Maybe I'm just a sadist, but I think it's good to try out new things :)

[live_by_lyrics]

Haha, I couldn't help but snort when I read your comment because in terms of the repeated use of 'fuck' and 'bastard' this is terribly written, but since I was doing it to create a certain mood I get what you mean :) Thank you !

[cheyenne_2539]

This is very different, and I like different. But I'm kinda confused on who the guy is. You hinted that he was the enemy, but in my opinon, you also gave him some apperance characteristics of Jack. Like the 'dark hair', 'obtuse nose', and 'thickest eyebrows'. I might be over thinking this, but whatever I'd rather over think things than be clueless xD.

[live_by_lyrics]

Thank you! I like different too haha even though I was hesitant thinking that this was too different even for me. And no you're not over thinking at all! It's Jack and he's the enemy and its all quite horrible...but you'll learn more soon enough :)

[cheyenne_2539]

Wait, I thought Jack was dead ('_') I mean didn't Alex slit his throat, ya know what I'm just gonna wait, and see what happens next. That sounds best

[live_by_lyrics]

Awh, no he's not dead (yet?) Alex did start cutting his throat, and he's bleeding pretty bad, but he flipped Alex over into the fire before he finished him off.

Sorry, I know it all a little ambiguous at this point. I was trying to create an ambiance ;)

[gaskarthloveme]

Damn, I'm stoked to see what happens next. This was super intense, and it kind of freaked me out a bit. I like how this is completely different to the usual Jalex stuff I read :)

[live_by_lyrics]

The last part should be done in a week or two max. And thanks :) You can tell I was in this weird funk when I started writing this, but I don't really consider myself your standard fluff writer anyways, haha.

[broken_capulet]

wow this is incredible

[live_by_lyrics]

thanks :)